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    Smartie's Wonderful Adventure

    作者 Author 插畫者 Illustrator
    符恩陶 Vania Foo (11)
    德望學校(小學部)
    Good Hope Primary School cum Kindergarten

    作者 Author 插畫者 Illustrator
    高皓晴 Cynthia Ko (10)
    德望學校(小學部)
    Good Hope Primary School cum Kindergarten

    作者 Author 插畫者 Illustrator
    李家睿 Sonia Lee (11)
    德望學校(小學部)
    Good Hope Primary School cum Kindergarten

    字數 Word Count: 0(中) 623(Eng)


    “Dododada dododidodada….” Smartie is so bored!

    “Why is every day the same? Pleeeeeease, I just want an adventure!”

    It's year 2145 right now and technology is so advanced there's nothing to do. The cars move itself; the rubbish throw itself; the rice cooks itself, and even the houses tidy themselves.


    Luckily, Smartie had a secret time machine. It's a bit scary, but so so super adventurous. A sip of the Future Potion and….

    “Hmm......where should I go this time? Dinosaur Age? But wait…. there is no human or potato creatures (like me)! Better go to the Cavemen Times instead!


    The fantastic ride of the time machine came to a sudden stop!

    “Where am I?” shouted Smartie.

    “Hi! I'm the leader of the caveman.”

    “It's my greatest pleasure to meet you.”

    “Welcome to the Cavemen Times.”


    “CAVEMEN BIG FIGHT IS ON AIR!!!!” the sound echoed around the cave. “Gotta catch a greedy thief!” the caveman left.

    “So hot here!” Smartie drank her potion and fell asleep. “Zzzzzz….”

    “Bang!! Bang!! Bang!!”

    “What's up?” said Smartie. She heard some yelling and saw many cavemen fighting. “STOP!!” she screamed.


    After yelling “STOP”, Smartie was very thirsty and wanted to go back home. She opened her backpack and looked for the Future Potion. Oh, no! She had drunk it all before she fell asleep!!

    “What?! No more Future Potion?!” she said, so I'll never get back home!!”


    A wise old caveman saw Smartie and said, “I know how to send you home, but you'd need to collect some items for me.”

    “Items?” asked Smartie.

    “Find from the sea a pearl and a Rainbow Starfish!”

    “OK,” said Smartie.

    “Good luck for your sea quest!” said the caveman.


    But…. Smartie didn't know how to swim!! Fortunately, a dolphin appeared, “Want a ride? C'mon!”

    Deep under the sea, there were lots of scary creatures. Smartie was terrified.

    “Those are CronjectivejezyChonkchonk. Look scary, but they won’t eat you. There the Starfish is! And a pearl is under its belly!”


    “Freeze! Want my starfish soldiers to ARREST you! I'm the King of the Rainbow Starfish!!”

    “Then I can't go back to the future,” Smartie sobbed.

    Smartie fumbled from her backpack a small bottle. “Wanna some magical inivisible powder, Your Majesty?”

    “WOW!! Ummm,...Yes!!”

    “Take good care of this Starfish.”


    But Smartie was a tiny little bit greedy! With stealth, she took one more Rainbow Starfish for herself and stuck it into her backpack.

    The Dolphin took her back to the shore and said goodbye.

    She ran back to the caveman to show him the treasures.


    Smartie was walking towards the caveman's place when she saw an octopus-like creature stealing a villager's apples.

    Smartie told the caveman about it. The creature was caught and Smartie took it to the village. There, the leader of cavemen roared, “Honesty is what we treasure the most in this village!”


    The other cavemen came and drew something on the ground.

    "What are they doing?"

    “They're drawing the Punishment Wheel, with horrible punishments written in each of the 36 sections. Criminals have to spin in it ninety times. When the wheel stop, finally, they will know what punishment they will get.”


    Finally, Octopus spun and spun in the wheel. His punishment was “fi^kbaecka”, which means “release” in English.

    Octopus was free but it felt so ashamed and decided to be nice forever after. Smartie recognized Octopus – an old friend from the future, and realized she herself should not be greedy.


    Smartie gave the wise old caveman the two starfish and the pearl. She said, “Sorry! I was too greedy!”

    The caveman said, “Shavhpzakybcei”, and threw all the items back to the sea. “Have your lessons learnt and it's time to go!”

    “Yeeeeeeeeeeeah!”

    Home again, eventually. What a wonderful journey!

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