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How They Came from Space in a Bike
林浚羲 Lam Tsun Hei Jonathan (13)
HKUGA primary school
字數 Word Count: 0(中) 699(Eng)
“KABOOM!” As Patrick’s wardrobe shattered into pieces, “What’s going on up there, are you ok?” Shouted his mom. “Sorry, it’s just Bob.” Patrick answered as he turned his attention away from his summer homework to his German Shepherd. “Look what you’ve done! Bob!” said Patrick.
Bob repeatedly barked at the window and immediately ran downstairs. “Bob! Stop running!” said Patrick as he ran downstairs while Bob had already burst out of the back yard door. Patrick followed him into the back yard and found Bob was standing next to a small crater, feeling unsure.
Patrick tiptoed to its edge, peered into the crater, saw two aliens riding on a weird looking bike. “Hi!” said the two aliens. “Who are you?” Patrick asked fearfully. “My name is Woo-Zee, he is my little brother Whissy and we came from planet Boowinunny.” said Woo-Zee.
“Are ……..you……... going…….. to eat us?” asked Patrick whose face seemed bloodless. “We eat only plant.” said Whissy. “We need to find mom a present. Would you may like to join us?” added Woo-Zee. “That must be fun!” replied Patrick. “What kind of present do you want for your mom?”
“Well, we want something from the Battle of Gravelines in 1588,” said Woo-Zee. “Don’t be silly, that’s impossible.” said Patrick. “We have a 4th dimensional bike which can travel through space and time. Come with us, We’ll show you” said Whissy as he signalled him to jump in.
“Here is your safety coat, put it on before you get onto the bike. Oh! your dog needs one too. There are belts attached to the coat, tighten it,” said Woo-Zee as he shoved two coats to Patrick. “Wait! there are only two seats, where am I going to sit?”
The two aliens opened a cabinet under the bike and took out a weird looking box which had wires and buttons everywhere. Whissy connected the wires and Woo-Zee pressed the buttons, then, two chairs, a computer with a screen and many other amazing things sprang out of the box.
“There you go, this is your seat, get in the bike, hurry up” said Whissy. “There are two seat belts on each side, you have to buckle them up. And remember, don’t touch any button,” ordered Whissy. “Ok ,let’s pedal,” said Woo-Zee.
Woo-Zee and Whissy pressed dozen of buttons, pull down bunch of levers and time started to reverse. Patrick saw himself got out of the bike and ran home all in backwards. “Pedal faster!” said Woo-Zee as he pressed more buttons. “Hold on tight, it’ll be a little bumpy,” said Whissy.
And suddenly they were wisked away by a strong wind. The bike kept spinning for a few minutes and a blinding flash blazed into their eyes. “We are about to land!” Shrieked Woo-Zee and they splashed into a salty sea. “Finally, we arrived at August 7th 1588, Battle of Gravelines.
It is now 6 o’clock in the morning, we only get two hours time,” concluded Whissy. “look!” said Patrick as he pointed outward. There were small ships set on fire and were sailing straight to them. They panicked and pedalled as fast as they could to dodge just in time.
Then, they heard some noise. They looked up and without warning, the sky rained cannon balls. They started to dodge but did not last long. They turned the bike flew up into the sky. Bob the dog plunged out of the carriage.
“Oh no, Bob must have thought that was a game of fetch.” Patrick shouted. “We must pull him back into the bike. Hold on!” ordered Woo-Zee as they flew downward. They glided through the water as they landed.
Whissy and Patrick reached out their hands to Bob’s paw and tried to pull him up, but clumsy Bob got hooked up with some ropes of a sinking ship. “Oh no, we are sinking” exclaimed Woo-Zee. Woo-Zee immediately set the time back to 2017. “Pedal now, harder!”.
Patrick woke up and found himself lying on his bed. He could not figure out if the whole adventure was really a dream. Suddenly he notified that something stuck out from his backpack, it was the ropes. And soaked Bob was standing beside the shattered wardrobe.1 / 16