• 請在最後一頁讚好我的故事書
    LIKE my story at the last page.

    Fighting A Criminal Mastermind

    作者 Author 插畫者 Illustrator
    陳泱丞 Chan Yeung Shing, Angus (12)
    聖公會聖彼得小學
    SKH St Peter's Primary School

    字數 Word Count: 0(中) 498(Eng)


    Detective Jacky had no case to solve, so he was reading books about science. His father wanted him to become an expert in science, so he ordered him to read lots of books about it. However, he was not interested in science so he was very bored and yawned sleepily.


    Suddenly, Detective Jacky heard someone scream, “Help! There’s a fire!”
    “Uh-oh!” He thought. Then he rushed to the building which was on fire. After an hour, the firefighters put out the fire but thirty-seven people were injured.


    Detective Jacky spotted a man called Sam who was dashing away, looking frightened. Detective Jacky got him and took him to the police station. However, the police could not charge him because there was no evidence.


    Detective Jacky decided to look for evidence in the building which was on fire. He found a secret room behind a wall on the seventh floor. There was a match box and a piece of paper full of words on the table.


    When Detective Jacky had finished examining and reading the paper, he found lots of Sam’s fingerprints and knew that he had been planning this for ten years. He told the police to charge Sam with hurting the others and arson. He would be put in the jail for sixteen years.



    Sixteen years later, Sam was out of the jail. He kidnapped Jacky’s son and asked him to go to a secret building to battle him if he wants to have his son back. He also said that he must not tell anyone or he would kill his son.


    Detective Jacky was a bit scared of Sam because he was a highly trained fighter although he learned how to fight when he was young. However, he wanted to get back his son too so he had no choice, but to go to the venue to battle with Sam.


    When Sam saw Detective Jacky, he roared loudly and wanted to hit him but Detective Jacky moved away and hit him quickly. Sam fainted and was charged by Detective Jacky with kidnapping, he was put in jail again. This time, he was in the jail for thirty years.


    Sam wanted to kill Detective Jacky so badly, he set off a bomb in the jail. He escaped before the super strong bomb exploded. The explosion destroyed the jail and killed eighty-six people. The government wanted to arrest Sam, so they put a billion dollars on his head.


    Detective Jacky knew that Sam’s target was him so he needed to train hard to protect himself or he would be defeated. He stopped his detective business and put up a sign that said, “Closed until Sam is caught”. He went to the gymnasium every day to train himself.


    Three months later, Sam tried to get Jacky, but he was stronger than before, so he caught Sam again and got the reward. Finally, Sam was charged with murder and he was put in prison for the rest of his life.

    1 / 12