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    Luckyland Adventure

    作者 Author
    李鎂琪 Li Mei Ki (12)
    樂善堂梁銶琚學校
    Lok Sin Tong Leung Kau Kui Primary School

    插畫者 Illustrator
    鄒嘉琪 Chau Ka Ki (13)
    樂善堂梁銶琚學校
    Lok Sin Tong Leung Kau Kui Primary School

    插畫者 Illustrator
    吳穎姍 Ng Wing Shan (13)
    樂善堂梁銶琚學校
    Lok Sin Tong Leung Kau Kui Primary School

    字數 Word Count: 0(中) 521(Eng)


    “Come quickly! Come quickly!” a pleasant and amiable girl said hastily on the weekend. Mandy was playing with her brother Thomas and friends at an enormous country park. “Ok!” Thomas replied instantly and calmly. They found some bare ground and saw a multi-coloured wardrobe.


    Mandy said surprisingly, “Oh! There is a wardrobe that we can hide in!” So, Mandy and Thomas hid in it. After twenty minutes, no one could find them. When they opened the door, they saw an unbelievable view. “Where …where are we?” Mandy asked nervously.


    “Don’t worry! Please calm down!” Thomas said. They looked around and wondered how to go back home. Suddenly, an alien walked up to them. They felt scared but they plucked up the courage to ask the alien how to go back home.


    “Excuse me, do you know how can we go back to Earth, Mr. Alien?” Thomas asked. “Yes, you need to go to Luckyland,”Mr Alien replied. Next, Mandy and Thomas went to Luckyland but they got lost. Mandy started crying and sobbed, “We can’t see our family again!”


    “Don’t worry! I’ll help you,” said a fairy godmother who suddenly appeared. She gave Mandy and Thomas two candies. “After eating the candies, a small elf will come to help you but she will disappear after ten minutes,” the fairy godmother said.


    Then, Mandy and Thomas ate the candies. “Hi! I’m Linda,” the elf said, “I’ll bring you to Luckyland. Let’s go now!”


    When Mandy and Thomas arrived at Luckyland, Linda disappeared. So, Mandy shouted, “We arrived here in Luckyland, please tell me how to go back home?”“Who are you? Here is Polite Planet. All aliens should be polite,” a female alien said angrily. “Sorry!” Thomas said.


    “We want to leave, can you help?” Thomas asked politely. Then, Miss Alien nodded. They walked and walked. “I’m hungry,’ Mandy said. “Could you give us some food, please?” Thomas politely asked Miss Alien. “Of course!” Miss Alien replied. She gave some fruit to them. “Thank you!” Thomas said.


    Mandy ate quickly and asked Thomas, “Why did the alien only reply to you, but not me?”“It’s because you are rude. You should be polite,” Thomas replied. “Ok! I will try,” Mandy said.


    Then, Mandy politely asked the alien how to go back home. Miss Alien replied, “Go straight. Then you can see a beautiful mountain. After that, you can see your home.”“Thank you!” Mandy said excitedly, “Oh! Miss Alien answered me!”


    Finally, Thomas and Mandy arrived at the mountain in Luckyland. They were happy. Suddenly, the fairy godmother appeared again. “Children, you are clever and polite. If you want to go back home, you need to think about a question. How did you get here?” Then, she went away again.


    “We are here because we hid inside a colourful wardrobe and then …,” Thomas said. Mandy screamed, “Wow! There is the multi-coloured wardrobe. Right! We need to hide inside it again and just wait.”


    Thomas and Mandy hid inside it and waited fifteen minutes. Then, they opened the door and went back to the park. They learnt many things in this amazing adventure.

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