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    A Mother's Love

    作者 Author
    Huang Shuk Yu Sakura (13)
    迦密梁省德學校
    Carmel Leung Sing Tak School

    作者 Author
    Lai Nga Man Nancy (13)
    迦密梁省德學校
    Carmel Leung Sing Tak School

    作者 Author 插畫者 Illustrator
    Li Yuk Ying Catherine (13)
    迦密梁省德學校
    Carmel Leung Sing Tak School

    作者 Author
    Bai Sen Hei Season (13)
    迦密梁省德學校
    Carmel Leung Sing Tak School

    字數 Word Count: 0(中) 618(Eng)


    “It’s mine!” shouted Tom at his little brother. Sam had taken Tom’s best toy away from him.
    When Tom shouted Sam felt very scared because he was only 4 years old and he started to cry.
    Mother came in and scolded Tom, “Tom! Why do you make Sam cry?”


    Mother cuddled Sam and angrily told Tom, “Go to your room. You are a bad boy.”
    Tom went to his room feeling jealous. He sat on his bed and cried. “My mother always scolds me, she doesn’t love me. She only loves Sam!” he said as he cried.



    That night, Tom was still sad and angry so he ran away from home. He felt his mum didn’t love him so he packed a bag and crept out quietly.
    He walked down the street and soon he was lost and hungry.



    “Hello there little boy,” said a man he met. “Where is your mother?” he asked.
    Tom told him that his mum didn’t love him so he ran away. The man said, “You must be hungry. I have food in my house.”
    Tom was very hungry so he said, “Thank you.”



    In the house there was lots of food and the man said Tom could eat anything he wanted. Tom ate 3 bowls of rice and some dessert.
    Then he fell asleep.
    When he woke up Tom tried to move his legs but he couldn’t.
    “What? Where am I?” he screamed.



    Tom looked all around but he wasn’t in the man’s house. He was in a big factory.
    He saw many other children and they were all chained to the tables. The children were busy making model flowers.
    “Here is a new one!” the man shouted as he pointed at Tom.





    Another man grabbed Tom’s arm and gave him some parts of the model and showed him how to make the flowers.
    “Get away from me! Let me go!” Tom yelled.
    “Hahaha,” the men laughed. “You are ours now. You must make the models for us.”





    Tom was terrified. Finally, the men left the factory. The girl next to Tom said, “Don’t worry. I was scared but I have been here 5 years and I’m not scared now.”
    “5 years!” Tom felt even sadder as he didn’t want to be locked up for 5 years.


    Tom missed his brother Sam but most of all he missed his mother. He knew she did love him and she wasn’t really cruel like the men in the factory. She just needed to help Sam more because he’s just 4. Tom felt awful.
    Then, he had an idea…



    “We must escape,” said Tom. The other children listened.
    “How?” they asked, “We are locked to the tables.”
    “But we can get the keys,” Tom said.
    “Good idea,” said Mary, (Tom’s new friend).
    “The man has them in his pocket. If you talk to him Mary, I can steal them.”




    Suddenly the man came back.
    “Sir, I am hurt,” Mary lied. “What’s wrong?” he asked.
    “It’s my leg.” The man bent over to get a closer look and Tom could see the keys in his pocket. He quickly grabbed them.
    “Your leg looks fine. Get back to work!” he shouted.


    “Sorry sir,” Mary said and she went back to making the models.
    When the man left, Tom stood up and unlocked himself and quickly unlocked all the others.
    “Keep quiet!” he whispered.
    They all quickly and quietly ran out of the factory.


    Tom ran home. His mum hugged him, “I missed you!”
    She rang 999 and the policeman sent the kidnappers to jail.
    Tom said, “I’m sorry I ran away. I know you love me.”
    His mother replied, “I love you AND Sam. A mother can love all her children not just one."

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